Ahora soy yo

Ahora soy yo

A Poem by brenda

i am trying to write poem in my native language :p


Te pide que me miraras por ultima vez

No crei, que me ibas a ignorar

Mas dias pasan y yo sigue esperando tu carino otra vez.


Ahora soy yo

La que va a regresar te va hacer tragar mis lamentos.

Ahora no me importas tu,

 porque ahora soy una persona diferente


En mis suenos tu estabas a mi lado,

 y yo te miraba todo el tiempo.

Siempre me importaste aunque nunca valoraste

 Mi amor

Siempre me preocupaba

Te di todo mi ser

Y si algunas veces me olvide de ti,

Fue por ver si tu me querias como yo te queria a ti.


Entonces ahora soy yo, perdon si cambie

Pero ya no podia mas este dolor.

Perdon y yo  ya te dije adios.



© 2011 brenda

Author's Note

i asked you to look at me
one more time
i did not think you will ignore me
more days passed
and i wait for your care again

now its me
who is going to come back and make you swallow all my regrets
now i dont care about you
because now im a different person

in my dreams you were alway next to me
and i looked at you all the time
i always cared about you even if you never value it
my love
i always worried
i gave you my all
and if some times i forgot about you
was because i wanted to see if you love me like i loved you

then now its me '
sorry if i changed i couldnt hold back more pain
sorry and i already said to you goodby

lol translation :)

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very emotional and to the point...good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

ew yo odio espanol!

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Me encanta!!!! I wish I knew Spanish, but going by the translation as well, it reads so well, the hurt and pain and the moving on. Beautiful poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on July 25, 2011
Last Updated on July 25, 2011



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