I Told You

I Told You

A Poem by .:Lu:.

I told you.
There's something wrong with me
You wouldn't believe me.
And now, she agrees.

I told you.
I needed help.
I knew what was wrong.
She echoes my thoughts.

I told you.
You called me a liar
And when you asked her,
She believed me.

I told you.
And you'll believe her.
So, when she told you,
I finally felt proud.

I told you.
She told you.
Who did you believe?
After I told you.

I told you.
And now,
I don't have to.
I'm free.

© 2011 .:Lu:.


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That was really good!!!! I like it :D I'm free
Love the ending(:

Posted 12 Years Ago



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