THERE

The thoughts are there

In the air

Everywhere

The thoughts are there

But where am I

In the sky?

On a boat

With a goat?

Oh where am I?

Did I die?

If I did

I was just a kid

Oh were is the

Up high,

Where I can fly,

And be myself

In everywhere.

So how can I get there?

Author's Note

review please:)

Reviews

Nice rhyme scheme.

[Tina Kline]

Another very impressive write. It's asking good questions and seeming confused. I really like this. I really like your style a lot.

[Allison]

Oh wow...
That wasn't a bad wow :) Definitely good.
Love the rhyming. It's almost confusing, but at the same time quite clear. Very unique touch.