just a traveler.

just a traveler.

A Poem by luviva
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its all about the journey.

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Just a traveler
Passing through this foreign land
Tripping over the unfamiliar terrain
But got to keep going
After every stumble and fall,
I get up with my head held higher than before
Because I know the view just gets better with every step.
I have to see the journey through.

© 2015 luviva


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Author's Note

luviva
I have been away for almost a year, I have missed you all and Hope you all been good.
I am back and hopefully back to stay.
Please read, review, criticize, as thats how we all grow.

Your's joan

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Very good Luviva. I'm not sure it is all about the journey. Poetry can take us into places that ordinary writing can't. It could be about the virus or many other areas.
Cheers,
Alan

Posted 11 Months Ago


Nice to meet you joan
I am curious about the first 5 lines, no subject or predicate, by design? implied?
I liked the poem anyway!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luviva

6 Years Ago

nice to meet you too perkele.
for your curiosity, sorry I cant provide a definite answer as I.. read more
Perkele.7885

6 Years Ago

I am ex-cop. we tend to ask a lot of questions. just the facts Mam! I just notice things that the av.. read more
luviva

6 Years Ago

Uhmm ex-cop guess I might wanna rethink all that I want to say.. But hey its poetry. U got to be una.. read more

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Added on May 1, 2015
Last Updated on May 1, 2015
Tags: life, challenges, courage.

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luviva
luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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