Eternally yours

I believe some people are just meant for each other.
Like a moth to a flame,
They each search for the light of life.
Love is life, and you are my love.
I will be eternal.

Author's Note

I'm always up and open for feedback! Please feel free to comment.

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Adele, I love the simplicity of the poem,
please forgive me, but moths are of night,
and butterflies of day,
but it sounds pretty, only try to put a little more to make it stronger, and convey
a more meaningful, perse, great write! advice, not putdown, much love , Maynard

[TeeMarie15]

Such a short yet beautiful poem! You have raw and amazing talent and i believe you will go far as a writer!! Keep up the good work!!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love is all the world needs really if it’s to survive

Yours is a beautiful write

[noddingoff]

I love the juxtaposition of the fragile moth to a burning flame. Makes the message stronger. Great job, concise and impactful < 3

[Kim S.]

This is so cute, I enjoyed this write a lot