love for you

My Love for you is so unreal 
I can't even explain these feelings I feel... 
When I lay down for bed at night, 
I wish you were there, holding me tight. 
And when I wake out of bed 
Thoughts of you fill my head 
You're the most beautiful person I know,
on the inside and out 
I can't get you out of my head..
you're all I think about ...
You're such a special person to me 
With you is where I want to be 
It would be even better if we always stay together ....
I just want to let you know...I'm gonna Love you forever.

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[MomzillaNC]

Deeply felt sentiment and a great testament to the love you feel.

NOTES:
"I can't even explain [the way] I feel... "

"And when I [wake… climb] out of bed"

"Thoughts of you [still] fill my head"

Again, you've changed the pattern of your rhyme and you meter falls apart with the last two lines. It's a little jarring when you don't hold the rhyming form throughout with some kind of textual shift to carry the change.
To hold the rhyme scheme, for example, with "on the inside and ou,t" maybe something like: "On the outside and deep in your soul"