her brown eyes

her eyes as brown as the ground .

like the dirt bed she had found .

she just stood there making no sound .

inside her , all the thoughts wound .

then her body hit the floor .

like a big thud when you slam a door . 

everything felt like it was coming from the core .

then she screamed with a big roar .

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The last moments perhaps of the many, well done, good read.