Upon my Peers

please please keep in mind that this isn't in my point of view..

Love me for my imperfections

Love me for my fears

Love me for the selfishness

I display upon my peers

Love me for a little while

Until I break down

Forever is just not my style

Now your whispers to me are much too loud

We have tried now too many times

To rebuild something that's not for our kind

The end is near, time slowly fades

I wish this wasn't true, but people never change

 

Maybe for a little while I 'd seem so much more different

But maybe for a little while you just refused to listen

Maybe I won't end this with a harsh note

If you try to comprehend everything I wrote

I promise I will try to be sober

This following October.

Author's Note

again..not my point of view...i hope you liked it!

Reviews

[Lauren Burch]

lovely pome. the colors and different font types add to the emotion and air of your words. Great write. Great presentation. :)

-Lauren Burch

[Lizzie]

I liked this a lot. It's easy for me to relate to it, unfortunately.

"Forever is just not my style
Now your whispers to me are much too loud
We have tried now too many times
To rebuild something that's not for our kind"
This especially is very well written, it's very easy to slip into the emotions the narrator is feeling.

[Sally Edwards]

Great poem, I like the point of view, you get it across very well in this short poem, I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more form you.