29-30

Ever dreamt of a new beginning?

 

The peace is buried,

Don’t bother to commune

The shadows are long

And bodies are no longer immune

 

We’ve swallowed it and poured it out

Our pride and our truths

You wanted your solitude

And you got what you wished for

A life your you and death for them

 

A tragic miracle and great misunderstanding

A good wish morphing into bad reality

They’ve not arrived, but the sea is static

Don’t hide in the basement, get up to the attic

 

Fix the world, and it falls apart for the 29th time

You think the cycles of of Saturn will never be mine

But I’ll put it back together,

For the first time making it right

It’ll only be for me, not for others to keep

 

I’ll roam, I’ll roam...

...only to find out I am not alone

Alright – this is a free entry to Earth

I’ll gather them ‘round

And welcome them to real first day of their lives.

Author's Note

I hope you liked it...

Reviews

[The Autumn Faerie]

I think it's a good start, but it could still use a little a little work, as with the line: "A life your you and death for them."

I am vexed by it...
Good beginning, though.
Keep writing, always!