No Rest with Fear

Confusion. Tears for my being, no rest; inner torment,

Sleep, wake, eat repeat, this medication stripping me bare,

With demons exposed, I fear the beast be released.

Am I awake, am I aware,

speak to me, I SAID LISTEN, I care!

Reviews

[Jesse]

Nice write....careful the schizophrenic malady. ... Joking of course. VERY NICE WRITE! :)

[Skai Rain]

I love this piece. It has so much feeling and tugged on my heart-strings. Thank you for sharing.

[Azure]

i can really feel the fear sadness and anger this piece spill i lov ethe ending it leaves the reader with alil something for thought

[Justin Fearn]

Thnx Azure x

[Reina Stone]

I've never seen the strong feelings of inner tension put so concisely yet accurately before. The ending leaves something to think about. Nice write.

[Justin Fearn]

Thank you for the feedback Remy, I'll take another look at that ending

[willweb]

Very deep and well written.

[Justin Fearn]

Thank you :-)

[Peacegal]

Beautiful, I like this and good job:)

[Justin Fearn]

Thank you :-)

[ayesha gupta]

well penned. your words describe the fear very well..
great job!

[Justin Fearn]

This is how I felt after a recent stay in hospital, thank you for taking the time to read it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely little emotive poem that conveys a sense of being lost and in emotional turmoil but wanting to be one who does good and brings love to the world.

[Justin Fearn]

Thank you John it's all about the love ;-)

[The Black Warrior]

I love this one, there is a lot of emotion in this piece. Nicely done!

[Justin Fearn]

You could say I was rather emotional at the time...

[The Black Warrior]

LOL...Hey, the best poems are the ones that comes in time of deep emotions ;)