Unrequited Love

Ask me what I can give, I will promise you my heart and soul.

Let me tell you what I want, that what only you wish to give.

For the many days and years, I have longed for just that.

Seeking for your redress, seeking for your forgiveness.

For all this time, I have only been an empty shell.

Your beauty stunning me, Let me bask within your glow.

Place you hand upon mine, we could walk this journey.

Following our dreams, We could walk upon the stars.

Author's Note

Please review still working this piece.

Reviews

[dan]

Having deep feelings for one who does not share the passion is a special type of heartache that most of us go through at some point in our lives. It's a pain that can quickly fade with the advent of a new love...or it can last a lifetime, relief never within reach. If you say you are still working on this piece I think you have a rock-solid foundation on which to build further. Good luck Michael. take care...dan

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome write Michael! Being a single man yearning for love I can totally relate to the words of this write. The final two lines of this write are great... perfect image in my mind :)