No tears

Loss you can not show

No tears

 

Finally you are all cried out.

Your eyes are red and the barren rims are dry.

But what do you do then?

How do you show the loss inside when you can no longer cry?

You sob but there is no moisture left.

The pain so raw, so deep and clawing to come out.

You heave and gasp for breath.

You let the screams and howls become a shout.

But no tears are left to cry.

As part of you has died.

Battered by the tide.

Now so dead inside.

Reviews

[WindsorWolf28]

Amazing. Thanks for entering it.

[magenta24uk]

Thank you I am glad you like it :)

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Oh I so wish you had continued writing and not ending it where you have...it could have been even better!

[magenta24uk]

I am afraid it ended where it decided to. :)

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

I am sure it did. :)

[Archia]

I thought this really expressed the sadness well, it had a lot of strength to it. I think the idea of having no tears left is a great one.

[Sami Khalil]

"But no tears are left to cry.

As part of you has died.

Battered by the tide.

Now so dead inside."

This was sad. I like the ending the most...:)......................

[TurtleClark]

The pain that she must have been feeling in order to have used of her tears. I really like this it has power.