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carmel skin brown eyes
the time flys by as im in his arms
there is no alarm he is m dear my love and the key holder of my heart
he is now a nig part of me
not a day gos by withoug him on my mind
lights no longer dim always act on a whim nothing lacking
here he is my love never harsh with word he is above all expectations
so sweet outr heartbeats beat together
yes he has my heart
has from the start ill show everyone
we will journey to the end
holding hands and be forever
at least i hope this to be true
because babe you got my heart

Reviews

[C.M.]

This a good poem, it seems very sweet. You have some spelling errors that you need to fix though.