Paramour II (His Voice)

The voice of the loving soul

 

 

Looking at you, while holding my sword.

 

My body can’t move, my wounds cry for the grave.

 

This moment I seized to indulge these memories

 

Only your lips can save my agony

 

Kiss me once more before my dying soul will say goodbye

 

Looking at your beautiful blue eyes

 

Those tears…I love you always.

 

All these pain will subside, I promised.

 

I will wait for you, until we both free.

 

To flee without you will be worthless

 

Better I will fight this war

 

For love we seek freedom, for Freedom we live.

 

For freedom we fought, for freedom we die.

 

Freedom set us free…in your loving memory.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.

[SimpleMind]

And freedom is simply where you stand :)

A poem of bravery and passion...you're always great Marlon!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks what happened to you? busy?

[Deeper La'jik]

Romance with a darker tone to it - Very creative

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thank you for your time reading my work :) glad you like it.

[Jack...]

Another beautful classic love poem in the style of olde. Very nice.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. Jack :) I appreciate your review Sir :)

[icelandicblue]

Love trumps all no matter what the circumstances and the sacrifices made for it in the name of freedom have happened from ancient time through today.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes Ice I agree :) thanks for the review :)

[Gerald Parker]

This has a medieval European feel to it. However, he says 'I will fight this war' and yet, is he not dying? Sorry, I'm confused.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

He is dying, but the love and faith give him strenght to carry on to achive freedom. The message here: never surrender, fight to death, until the last drop of blood coming out from the lovers wounds.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gerald for asking, this poem is the related to Paramour I (Her Voice)

[Gerald Parker]

Like real life.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

yes :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another really flowing and romantic piece.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks John I appreciate your review :)

[Junert]

Nice one.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks my sister :) thanks for the review

[Eddie Phillips]

Epic and sweet. This was an exceptional write. Thank you for sharing.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brother, I appreciate it big time. Good luck also to your write. Thanks for the review.