Little Angel's Voice

The unwanted child

         

 

 

Dark, cold and lonely space,
I cried, fears in my soul, confused about what the future may bring,
Chaotic, heartless, reality; we’re separated,
I've been hurt, I’ve languished pain, I’ve wished I never lost you, I've been haunted,
You never give me a chance to call you my Mother,
It breaks my heart my little angel, we've made a terrible mistake,
I dreamt about you and my father, seems I have your eyes and I have my father’s face,
You look like your father my son, and your eyes, so beautiful like mine,
I wish I could kiss you, hold you and cry with you,
I am sorry; I am too scared to fight for you my baby boy,
I wish you could hear my voice and feel the beat of my heart,
Sorry, I am sorry my angel, Goodbye…

Author's Note

Every year thousands of unwanted babies aborted, abortion is a massive ungodly practice of Doctors and Medical Practitioners that cost sometimes the life of the mother. I write this poem to give voice for those little angels that died and deprived a chance to live in this world.

Reviews

[Imara]

I really liked that you told this from two perspectives. It is hard on a mother to give away her child (at least I should hope that it is) and it is sad. You do a great job expressing the regret, fear, anxiety, and love felt by both mother and child in this piece. I will stay away from arguing the moral issues here I think this could be used to persuade others to change their minds on this topic. Very powerful, great job.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks a lot Imara :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Every year thousands of unwanted babies aborted, abortion is a massive ungodly practice of Doctors and Medical Practitioners that cost sometimes the life of the mother. I write this poem to give voice for those little angels that died and deprived a chance to live in this world.

[Pax]

I hear this too many times in our cultures now a days(in our home country). I heard in the news, a unwated baby found in a trash bin. ~ it's a sad fact that some wanted a child that they can never achieve in their own roots and some don't need any then waste it away through foolish mistakes. I found this a very sad piece, Great job kabayan!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes, it so sad, why they keep doing this and they can't even give a child a chance to live, it is heartless. Thanks for reading Pax.

[Pax]

i understand kabayan, no child must be unwanted ~ a child is a gift and blessing to everyone around him/her ~ your most welcome kabayan, you voice is heard in this write perfectly!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Pax :)