Thoughts on sex

Thoughts on sex

A Poem by maricoona91

Sex as a matter of black and white...

Sex is a sin before marriage, and pure within marriage.
"You aren't married.  It was a sin.  Dirty.  Shame worthy, guilty, something that will stick like gluten in the colon, fresh harm to your soul, talk to someone who can help you handle your mistake."


Sex as a matter of color.

In that room,
A naked womb
wordless and aware
A baby's first cry
shameless and high
hurt from the inside
Whimpering laughs and heavy moans
Life begins in aching insides
Kiss my open mouth reaching out

Belly button to belly button
Belly button to back,
A baby's first cry, a baby's first laugh.

© 2015 maricoona91


Author's Note

maricoona91
Thoughts are good since I'm a beginning writer, just nothing too harsh please! haha

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Very true, a lot who are pro life -and coming from the pro life camp know the thinking of a lot of the others - see a child orn out of wedlock as less than others.

Thats the reason why most girls opt for abortion, to hide the shame.

There should be no shame, in or out of wedlock, a life is a life. Love is love. Churches have a lot to answer for.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

maricoona91

8 Years Ago

Tomas,
Your comment is interesting, I hadn't even thought about pregnancy when I wrote this. .. read more



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Now what in life is a matter of black and white? There is nothing, really. And I'm struggling to understand your real point of view. This is not clear. Don't understand what you mean when you say "Sex as a matter of color.

Very important topics.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

maricoona91

8 Years Ago

Thanks Rick, I'll try to clarify it. I am trying to say that things are more grey area than black a.. read more
Rick Puetter

8 Years Ago

Understood. Thanks.

Rick
Very true, a lot who are pro life -and coming from the pro life camp know the thinking of a lot of the others - see a child orn out of wedlock as less than others.

Thats the reason why most girls opt for abortion, to hide the shame.

There should be no shame, in or out of wedlock, a life is a life. Love is love. Churches have a lot to answer for.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

maricoona91

8 Years Ago

Tomas,
Your comment is interesting, I hadn't even thought about pregnancy when I wrote this. .. read more
Considering the way you wrote your other poem, this is a touch confusing to me. Good writing though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 19, 2015
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