our day of arrival

a birthday   awhh shucks  don't celebrate them any mo     some say

but I say   that we all do... without that day

there would be no zoo of life no shudders or smiles

no extasy  or joy, no wonderment of pushing out a chlld from our womb,

no contentment or acute pain

no loss no love no nuthin.....

so happy birthday to us all

andlove it  stand up and do not fall

 though we might say__

awhhh shucks  no way

Marilyn nepp sturner nov 15 2015

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

No .. it's good to say "Happy B'day" .. cos, today, we're all alive so it's fair sharing peace with each other (of course, sharing a bit romance either .. lol) ... the life's short or may be way shorter living so... I believe, noone would be there to say "Happy B'day" anymore to anymore when everybody'd be sleeping in their own funerals with the rest in peace ... Right? So, before the eyes go closed, why don't let 'em watch & capture the whole beauty of world in it so as .. the heart could chant: "I will be beating ov'r the shed of this world as long as the fishes swimming in the sky & the "Stars" twinkling in the ocean ...

...pause

Wa..wait .. did I say something wrong? Fishes in sky & the stars in oceans? Ah, stupid and bloody stereotypes typos. Please.. auto correct. Lol

Anyways ... Happy B'day, ... Viva la bimbo ;)

[marilyn 1225]

love to see fishes in the sky if you look at the clouds in the blue sky you can find one and the white foam sprinkles like some stars on you lets go for a swim in the ocean walk under a waterfall and shout halalooya all together celebrating the air of life... viva the real writer! u

[Kelly Scheppers]

They give us the privledge of growing old...and that's a good thing!

...especially when there's cake!!! ; )

[marilyn 1225]

here is to the cake lol thanks for your happy comment!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i don't mind birthdays...they validate the fact i am still around to celebrate them...

i do like your words,

j.

[marilyn 1225]

You are so right! Thank you for commenting. Happy birthdays to you.

[Tom]

" Here, here " many happy returns to all on their birthday !

Thoughtfully penned with cheerie overtones throughout !

[marilyn 1225]

Thank you Tom! I appreciate this.