more than just me   more than just a daisy alone

more than just me more than just a daisy alone

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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hard to compare a lifetime of love, depression, loss, happiness to one flower

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my  heart is like the daisy I wore in my hair when I was married
the daisy I picked as a girl
the flower of simplicity
and yellow ' and white beauty
yet one by one its petals fall off
to the ground or blown to the wind like
human ashes
we human flowers bloom
we fade
we die
but the existence of a daisy 
will grow again
as the new young 
flourish forever

the heart bleeds mourns and burns
so perhaps a more descriptive 
comparison
might be  a hurricane
destruction rain violent wind
and the after math
where the new daisies grow

Marilyn

© 2017 marilyn 1225


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daisies are really tough...and they live through droughts, storms, they survive...even as they lose petals...they grow new ones ...
and flourish...
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

I will keep that in mind whenever that ' low feeling overwhelms me you are like a minister of g.. read more

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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