"maybe"

nothing much just need to write

what is a '' broken heart"?

does it crack and rip apart

or is it an infinite sadness,that 

feels like it is tearing your existence apart

it can make you jittery and morose

it can make you seek solace and comfort

 if that can not be found 

with a loving ear or another soul

it can make you sleep and  try hard  to forget

under the warmth of a cover

covert and hidden, warm and numb

till that hour oh so so  far away

 Might be .....

the day you miraculously  recover

...

'' MAYBE''    Marilyn nepp sturner  oct 24, 2017

Author's Note

how does deep pain leave us
mysteriously it can MAYBE?

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

It comes a time where all we can think are just maybes. True emotions are effectively expressed.

[marilyn 1225]

Thank you so much, Najam... my secret to writing is that i do not think, i feel and let it happen.. appreciate your reading it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Great start for writing poetry. It is my pleasure reading your work :)

[Lobo Silent Paws]

this was very well expressed and i enjoyed th style of writing here as well super post

[Paul Bell]

I think it's the old adage.Time heals.
Though some just give up and never recover.
You just have to get back on the bike.

[marilyn 1225]

agree thank you so much in my case it is the treadmill thank you

[Malvika]

Maybe the only way to cure a broken heart is having a faithful and loving person by your side .its a great poem.

[marilyn 1225]

thanks you are very kind ,,, but I am far beyond the point where I can go find '' a loving person '' by my side aint gonna happen so I find other ways for a fulfilling life... thanks so much!!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Deep pain never leaves me it circles round in tears of maybe.

Regards,
Al

[marilyn 1225]

yes it does................ thank you, Marilyn