what a screen!

what a screen!

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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temporary happy time-------------------------------- a new dell with a super large screen

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keys on a keyboard that works
a screen lit up   -large and clear
ideas to write-
passages to read
pictures to view
all and all  
life is good,  and____
many poems to read and to write

that are brand New



marilyn nepp

© 2017 marilyn 1225


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True and expressive poem. A simple situation was beautifully described. I really liked this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

Thank you for such kind words,Najam! it was just that my old puter was out of whack , seriously terr.. read more
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

That's really wonderful. You are most welcome.
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Righty ho then miss, let's see what the future brings us.
Good morning

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

Gee, it is good evening now at 10:39 pm thanks so much for reading and your comment.. and your .. read more
nothing like feeling that fresh urge to write...

but wow, i sure miss my old electric...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

NOW THAT IS WORTH REMEMBERING!! GOOD FOR YOU AND YOUR WRITER'S TALENT AND URGE
jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

you are kind...the pizzas did survive, by the way...i did keep enough attention on them.
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

lol hope u had a few for yourself!
happy writing,happy reading,maybe it will last forever

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

like your optimism
just wrote a poem on here and lost it was for Halloween oh well .. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

my pleasure

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Added on October 29, 2017
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marilyn 1225
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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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