A Poem by marty360

A quick piece

B roken,
R ight in the center,
I s our great land,
T eeming with evil,
A s if that's all we've ever known,
I t's time to rebuild OUR kingdom,
N ew starts are what we need.

We have the power,
We have the means,
We have the capabilities,
So this is our finest hour.

Rebuild and rejoice,
The land we love,
Raise the flag,
High above.

We may be broken,
And beaten down,
But we're a nation,
Who are mighty and proud.

So stand tall,
With your chest out wide,
We're a nation of survivors,
And our pride shall never die.

© 2013 marty360

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Not the only place that's crippled by a new regime

Posted 7 Years Ago

Britian does have a way of calling you back, doesn't it. Lol. I moved back awhile ago, can barely stand to leave this mighty place :P
the rhyme and flow were done very well. You have a great talent.

Posted 8 Years Ago

"this is our finest hour" Winston Churchill.....i have a portrait of him on my writing desk, looking at him right now. awesome write , my friend. i may be an American, but i was born in Wiltshire.....lived 8 years in England and miss her terribly. well penned!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, I appreciate it :). She does have that certain sense that lures you back,.. read more

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Added on May 24, 2013
Last Updated on May 24, 2013
Tags: Britain, England, United Kingdom, broken, winston, Churchill



Bradford/Huddersfield, West Yorkshire, United Kingdom

21 years of age. Studying Global Business Management at university and I am in my final year of study. Plan on moving to America after my degree so you may see a lot of American themed pieces or pie.. more..

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A Poem by marty360