Veterans

Veterans

A Poem by eric
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Poem i dug out that i wrote for verteran's day. A little sketchy, but it'll do.

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To honor those who’ve fallen,
To honor those who serve.
To honor those who are lost,
Our thanks, you deserve.

 

To the soldier in the bunker,
Who’s always trying to save.
The land of America,
Home of the brave.

 

To those on the front lines,
 Who are always at risk.
And even if they lose their lives,
They will always be missed.

 

To those with all the medals,
That show courage and strength.
This is how I will show,
My great many thanks.

 

So let’s send a prayer,
To those who fight and die.
For this is what we always call,
Great American Pride.

 

Thank You Veterans!

© 2010 eric


Author's Note

eric
srry, i didnt know what to put for genre, ignore my selection

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I love this poem, I have family fighting now.
They would love this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"To those on the front lines,
Who are always at risk.
And even if they lose their lives,
They will be surely missed."
Excellent rhythm and flow. Nice work!
~Jessie-Clarie

Posted 13 Years Ago


that was an amazing poem. not many people think about the people that serve for our country. especially not when writing poetry. i know I dont think about those people alot and actually you have kinda opened my eyes. tonight, i will pray for those people. thank you for this poem. and im sure all those people that fight for our country, and all the people that know people that fight for our country, are thankful too. you're a great writer and a great person for thinking of them. good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Such a beautiful piece. I love it, truly amazing!! Keep writing your heart out!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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this is a great way to show thanks to those who fight to keep us free every day. Who have to be away from their families to help the whole country and protect out families. The flow of this poem is great.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Ima
awesome!!!
a brilliant writing ... worthy read no doubt
i especially adore the topic of this poem .. i mean all of these soldiers should be shown some gratitude by the people themselves =)
loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Oh!! This is amazing!! I love it, this is an awesome poem, a wonderful tribute to Veterans!! I especially love:

"So let’s send a prayer,
To those who fight and die.
For this is what we always call,
Great American Pride."

Love this poem. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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"To those on the front lines,
Who are always at risk.
And even if they lose their lives,
They will always be missed."
great lines of truth. this poem has a good flow, and i definitely enjoyed reading this piece. great write!


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Chicago, IL



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