Midnight Flight

Clap to the beat of the thunder's roar
Clinch the lightening and feel the orgasm
As hail streams down entangled bodies
Our hearts beat in fear, excitement, and in ecstasy
The unknown waiting in our future's crying eyes
The dew on our skin says there's a new beginning
A chance to run naked on cotton candy clouds
Sinking in velvet feeling, cuddling cradle, and sweet sensation

Author's Note

I made some edits, let me know what you think

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to know freedom and no fear. When I was young. Good to test love and all things. I knew one day I would learn to stop being fearless. I like the flow of thoughts i the poem. No weakness in the amazing poem. Was a pleasure to read.
Coyote

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i think that this reads somewhat like a kind of open erotica made accessible to the whole family, made me smile too, thanks

[L. Edward Neale]

Feel that electricity. The imagery works on more than one level. I dig that line: "the unknown waiting in our futures crying eyes." Quite a moving piece.

[JourneyBlu]

Love the visual and feeling of intimacy without any vulgarity. It is an elegant and sensual write. Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A first encounter in all of its mixed emotion layed out in all its weather flayed progression and predicted fear. Great piece and well written. Flows off the mind like adrenaline.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you

[Cosmic kid]

beautifully written.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you

[Loner]

A real free poem expressed with true feelings indeed

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you

[Loner]

U are always welcome.

[MOON]

Lovely sensual write and the imagery of thunder and nature is quite lovely.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank You

[Joe Morris]

Absolutley epic bro. I like the way you have used the imagery in a none too graphic way, yet it still allows for a rather up front presentation of sensuality. Real nice poem bro :)

[Freedom's Child]

Thank You!

[spiritwind]

I found it incredibly sensual. Gulp. You know I am somewhat distracted now so how can I make meaningful comments on the mechanics of this. Ummm... clap to the beat of the thunder's roar.... okay I better move on. Clinch the lightning......oh my word. Moving rapidly on. Feel the orgasm. Well, that did it. Oh... as hail streams down entangled bodies... oh , go critique your own poem I am going to take a cold shower. ARGH!!!

[Freedom's Child]

Thank You!

[Junert]

Nice.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank You!