Conscious

On the delicate frost of yesterday

 

My memory floats like a leaf

 

My want fights to notice

 

and take account

 

All fears lost to ecstasy

 

but lucid sensibility

 

begs for reason

 

and a penumbra of a

 

conscious thought

 

flies just beyond my reach. 

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Velvety soft emotions drift through this one.....like a lacy veil to wear on a Sunday evening. Dreamy! Lydi**

[Revery]

Thank you Lydi, you continue to honor me with your reviews. Thank you for reading.

[shallimarRose]

Lovely wording here that flows like satin.... shallimarRose

[Revery]

Thank you shallimarRose. :)

[shallimarRose]

You're welcome Lorena..

[LA Lorena]

I know this feeling all too well. I say let go and let it burn! :)

[Revery]

Burn baby burn! Thanks Lorena.

[Frieda P]

So eloquent in it's simplicity.

begs for reason
and a penumbra of a
conscious thought

So inviting...such a graceful read.

[Revery]

Thank you Frieda, I appreciate you reading and commenting. :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I really enjoyed this one. ;-)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Stated so eloquently as struggles of losing oneself in fearless abandon vs remaining grounded and rational through passions that catch like wildfire. Where does the line stand between all of what the heart is capable of feeling and the mind's conscious alerts that the fire is going to blaze out of control???? No one knows the true answer, my friend for each being is different, some able to withstand a fire so immense it can burn another alive....
Wonderful piece!!!! Obviously thought provoking!
Lots of love!
:)

[Revery]

Perfect!!!! Thanks you dear.

[Summer]

You are becoming a fav. More please?

[Revery]

"More please" is a very titillating phrase. It stirs something inside.

Thanks for reading.

[Dr. Wood ?]

memories tend to hide in dark corners now and then...I often imagine them talking to one another and laughing as I try to search them out

[Revery]

Thank you sir. I appreciate you reading and commenting. I agree the mind is a funny thing.

[Lovely Lady]

Extraordinaire! Wow this is a lasting poem for all seasons. Beautiful!
~lovely lady~ ♥

[Revery]

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed.

[lost girl]

I must admit it is that pic that drew me in for further inspection. That solitary leaf ...and then I found more. This piece is so simple but has great depth. I think I may wander the halls a bit more to see what other things I might like. thank you.

[Revery]

Thank you for your comment, glad you enjoyed the write.