My Caramel Sundae

I wrote this for the hottest chick of all time, hoping to get lucky.

 

In the land of hot chicks, there is a queen.

 

She’s the hottest chick I’ve ever seen.

I’ve seen a lot and I was amazed,

When that chick’s looks left me so dazed.

She nearly knocked me out, smiling in her way,

I’d like to see the rest someday.

 

She’s my Caramel Sundae

 

She’s a storm of sexy, tearing up the Earth

And she knows just what she’s worth.

With her innocent eyes and crafty wits

Man I’d like to grab her….

 

Sweet Caramel Sundae

 

You know I’d like to eat her cherry

But she makes me feel like Tom chasing Jerry.

I’ll chase her my whole life, because I just can’t let her pass.

I’ve got to grab a hold of her magnificent….

 

Oh, sweet angels of mercy don’t make me wait.

I want her on my dessert plate.

I need her now and this may sound corny,

But that chick just plain makes me horny.

 

Oh apex of women, I know you can hear me.

Now you know that I need you near me.

You stole my mind and my heart went following.

If you leave me now, you’ll leave me wallowing

In a broken life, with no hope for joy,

Why not just make me your lover boy?

Reviews

[w. r.]

ohhh, i feel this about...every time i walk down the street...eeeek. nice work, man.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A lot of humor in the poem . what are you wanting to grab? lol ..
I like this and so should the girl you refer to as 'My Caramel Sundae'..
Great poem .. hot sticky and sweet .. lol

Chloe
xoxo

[Candle in the wind]

How sweet and honest!!I love to see such tranparency.

[None]

Don't let her go. I hope you get together because an attraction like that is sad to waste. I really like the title and it's good to get inside a guys head and see what they are thinking. Nice rhyme and a fun poem!

[Siennaskeleton]

I love this. It's adorable and really funny. and I'd for sure agree with shalini...if a guy wrote that for me I'd be on that like a hobo on a ham sandwich.
great write!

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

That was actually adorable and funny. I hope it worked for you. Back in the day, I would have definetely been somewhat swayed by a poem as fresh as this one.
Love All, Mejasha

[Shalini R]

haha, thats cute
if it makes u feel any better
if a guy wrote this to me
id jump in bed with him
=P

[ah]

amazing write, i love it

[Brenda Sue]

Oh so very cute. I love it. Sounds like you got it bad. Great write.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I need her now and this may sound corny,
But that chick just plain makes me horny.

I LOVE THIS LINE! Sexy write! And, of course, one for my favorites!