We Have an Angle Sum of 180 Degrees -- Alpha

We Have an Angle Sum of 180 Degrees -- Alpha

A Poem by Kami Grace
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First in the series of three -- the origin.

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Bruises and cuts,
had brought blood,
pouring out of these wounds,
not seen by anyone,
but the anguish,
dwelt deep inside the heart.

I looked back,
yet all that came into vision,
was vacancy,
missed chances,
that would have brought me to light.

Of course.

Of course I was always on the wrong path.

Every time I made a decision,
it had to condemn me,
to drag me into eternal oblivion,
into soaring regrets,
that ached when recalled,
that pained when reminded,
that tore me apart when even the slightest reminiscence struck.

Day after day.
Night after night.
Nothing, nothing,
nothing had changed,
as if the world stopped spinning,
that this mental inferno would never vanish.

They come,
and go,
and come,
and go.

I might be like a star,
surrounded by planets,
that sprinted around me,
trying to obtain my ray of warmth and brightness.

But the true planet that I longed for,
was wandering,
in another galaxy.

© 2015 Kami Grace


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I might be like a star,

surrounded by planets,

that sprinted around me,

trying to obtain my ray of warmth and brightness.




Very nice writing: I loved it and will be looking for part 2 Kami Grace:
But the true planet that I longed for,
was wandering,
in another galaxy.

Nice title - intriguing and great ending. Thank you. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and giving me a wonderful comment, Dale! :)
I'm currently wo.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

It took me away with you...thank you & you're welcome!



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I might be like a star,

surrounded by planets,

that sprinted around me,

trying to obtain my ray of warmth and brightness.




Very nice writing: I loved it and will be looking for part 2 Kami Grace:
But the true planet that I longed for,
was wandering,
in another galaxy.

Nice title - intriguing and great ending. Thank you. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and giving me a wonderful comment, Dale! :)
I'm currently wo.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

It took me away with you...thank you & you're welcome!
I love how you started it!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the comment, Emily! :)
This was again well written, can't wait to read the others. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and leaving a lovely review, Jamestown! The next 2 are coming out s.. read more
I can foresee big things for you =]

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

9 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you very much, Satan! :)

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