Insane

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Haha.

Streams of juice,

flow from this silent container.

No focus in your irises,

no voice from your mouth,

no breath through your nostrils.

Haha.

Perhaps you have not realized,

that the crimson in your core,

nil but plain black.

The pounding in mischief,

the racing in malevolence,

once fearful sounds of misfortune.

Now, silence.

Haha.

What do you feel,

when I cleanse you,

with a silver blade?

What do you feel,

when the dominoes closed,

in on itself?

Haha.

Taste their painful tastes.

Cry their final cries.

Fear their haunting fears.

Predator and prey,

reversed.

Haha.

Be the miserable soul,

under my scythe of vengeance.

For the evil deeds you have done,

payment is overdue.

Shall I bring forth your verdict,

no trail,

no jury,

only my unfeeling words.

Haha.

Pay for the death of my loved ones.

Haha.

Hahaha.

Hahahahahahahahahahaha.

Reviews

[Confuser]

Kami: I love this poem! I began the other day, and couldn't wait to return. I am so surprised at how much I enjoy this genre of poetry. When I cleanse you with silver a blade...gave me chills. Your writing is BRILLIANT...I hope you will write another one. Vengence is wonderful to imagine...I love the detail, the phenomenal wording, and of course the ending just made it a slam dunk...Dark and beautiful. Thank you so much! Dale

[Kami Grace]

Thank you very much for reading, Dale! I do think I will write more dark poems in the future, but something suddenly popped up in my mind on my way home and I think I will work on that series first! It is going to be a sad series ;)

Kami

[Confuser]

You're welcome...can't wait to read..dale

[jdtunafish3175]

Neat stuff! I love homocidal insanity, I should write more of that myself :)

[Kami Grace]

Thank you very much for reading! Looking forward to your works! :)

Kami

[Emily]

I loved that way you presented it. It was nice how you put the "haha's" in between. Great descriptions for a dark poem.

[Kami Grace]

Thank you for the wonderful review, Emily! :)

Kami

[Emily]

I love the meaning!
I always seem to like poems like this!
Keep it up!

[Kami Grace]

Glad that you like it, Emily! :)

Kami

[Jamestown]

Dark piece of work, certainly well written and expressed!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kami Grace]

Thanks so much for the lovely comment, Jamestown! :D

Kami

[Garland]

Very dark, just the way I like it.

[Kami Grace]

Thank you very much for reading, Garland! :)

Kami