Alone

Alone

A Poem by Max

Befriend the darkness,
find comfort in pain,
you can only lose,
you have nothing to gain.
you've gone through so much,
yet gotten so little,
you've been left alone as such.

Love hate,
hate love,
there's no difference to fate,
but you cant let it shove.
still you must
try, try, try
to find out
why, why, why?

© 2012 Max


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Max
Thank you for reading my second poem. please review.

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Beautifully portrayal of inner feelings
that is what a writer is ..........

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice. Haha. Love really isn't worth it huh? I know how it feels. It sucks. Nice write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow that's amazing great poem :) I love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really good!! I really like your Alone poem!:) Excellent job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


i think my friend and co-author would absolutely adore this poem. i liked it myself. it has a lot of truth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Exquisite

Posted 7 Years Ago


it's good everyone's life is screwed up but that's what makes us stronger you have good potential. i think i can relate. i hope you don't take that last comment the wrong way I've said it and some people react strongly

Posted 7 Years Ago


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hmm
Like your rhyme scheme, nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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I am 14. My lifes just been pretty screwed up. I just recently started to write poetry. i am very weird, and i like rock music, playing the bass, knives, and fire (and no, im not emo, i just like kniv.. more..

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