First Crush

First crush is memorable....

It was in the twelfth standard, when I first saw her in my tuition batch. White complexioned, black wet hairs lengthening up to her knees, deep oceanic eyes guarded by a pair of spectacles, pink small lips, curves carved out by specialized Hands, perfectly curtained by the black skin fit top  paired up with blue jeans, enhancing her beauty. Her aura was spreading out, flushing out an air of importance wherever she hopped into.

I was awestruck ed by her beauty, beauty that could drive anyone crazy, beauty that could even make the fairies jealous of, beauty that could have transformed the devils into fairies.

I too was carried by her beauty, her aura. But she was completely unknown to me. All I knew was that she was damn beautiful.

She was making her move towards the class, and fortunately or unfortunately I was the in the last row, and her one step closer made me skip one heartbeat.

"Excuse me!", she said.

Dumbfound by her beauty, I was out of my senses, out of my words, out of this world, lost in my world dreaming about her, that I completely over heard her words and sat blocking her way towards the front row of the class.

"Excuse me!", she chirped once again, a little louder, accompanied by a jerk from behind, not from her, but from my friend, which was enough to thrash me into the harsh world of reality.

"Yeah! Yeah! Sorry!", I apologized, and cleared her way.

I didn't knew her name, but still her beauty was enough for me to be drowned in her.

Dedicated to everyone for their first crush....

Reviews

[Tavionna]

Amazing, i love the desciption of feelings. =)

[Ayvid N]

The passage has to be refined more but the ardor is raw and the reader can feel it. You write with a lot of emotion.

[Mayur Sadhu]

thanks.... i will try to make other one much refiner...
please review the other ones...

[Ayvid N]

Welcome. I'll be back with more feedback soon.

[Mayur Sadhu]

your feedback will be heartily welcomed....