The Passive Aggressive

The Passive Aggressive

A Poem by #SecretWriter
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I based this poem on a true story. It was bugging the hell out of me for a while, then right as I made up my mind and decided to put it behind me once and for all, my problem was back in my face.

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The Passive Agressive
In my workplace where I must be kind
Typical fates have bound my hands
Where I can't avoid your eyes
Where I am forced to stand.

I fake a smile
You fired first
I'd run a mile,
from you, You're dirt

You push and shove
And f**k me off
Mentally of course
I'm on the clock, and of the cloth

My ways are strange
My aggression I hide
I'd strangle you
But must imply

Your confusion of course
it still remains
Friends? Lovers? To be?
That was yesterday!

Make up your mind real fast
Patience is lost
What I'm trying to say
Is please f**k off

© 2014 #SecretWriter


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Well no holding back here… if someone is shedding negativity on your white clothes then you have the right to separate yourself from their space.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A topic which few people write about, but anyone who actually works in the work place can relate to. Kudos on choosing such a great subject. The wording is good, but I am fairly certain it can be improved. I recommend coming back to this at a later date and seeing how you can rework it. (I think it is already good, but with such a great idea for a poem, it deserves even more work)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Indeed, it's that situation we all have to deal with, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


oh my gosh, i love it. Easy to read and so honest. Instant smile to my face it brought. Thank you and well done. Huge applause

Posted 10 Years Ago


The world is full of cactus ( pain in the **s ) ...I'm glad I don't have to sit on it everyday

Posted 10 Years Ago


I enjoyed this piece. So many emotions we have running like an undercurrent when we are faced with a situation where we have to 'grin and bear it'. Thank you for sharing...looking forward to your poetry :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very angry, very cool.
i liked it.
Welcome to W.C.
-Dragon

Posted 10 Years Ago


#SecretWriter

10 Years Ago

Thanks :)
I think anger can flow out so well sometimes, sadly in the situation I had to bottle.. read more

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Added on January 15, 2014
Last Updated on January 15, 2014
Tags: Aggression

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#SecretWriter
#SecretWriter

Rochester, Kent, United Kingdom



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Most of my characters have a dark secret, an evil plan or are just bat-s**t crazy. I'm new to most types of writing but enjoy it as often as possible. I might be a little bit crazy, but anyone w.. more..

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