A HAIKU ON CASCADING WATERS

Swirling like a storm

The water crashes downward

I flush the toilet.

Author's Note

None of my haikus are very serious...

Reviews

[nigrum homonculus]

again! epic haiku. i actually love these. please make more man. i'm already a fan

[Roger Ferguson II]

the last line was unexpected.....but in an anticlimactic ironic sort of way. its not often i find humorous haikus. i like how you kept to the traditional nature theme, adding a modern day twist at the end. good write

[Miguel]

Ha, thank you! I'm glad you found the last line unexpected; that's what I was going for. ;)

Glad you like it, thanks for the review!