No one knew but Him

The abuse that

no one witnessed.

 

The satisfaction

from the scars that

no one knew.

 

The painful strike

from her husband's

hand that only she

endured.

 

The tears that he

cried becuase no

one believed.

 

The gunshot that

no one heard becuase

the music was to loud.

 

While His loving hand

carressed them all

while they left this

world...

Author's Note

please excuse the minor errors...(grammer/spelling)
But please review and be honest! i worked hard on it! Hope you enjoyed

Reviews

[Rae]

Impressive. I was really gripped by this and even though my vision is awful and I'm not wearing my glasses/contacts and it was difficult, I couldn't detach myself. I felt nearly everything you said. I like how you said "Caressed them all as they left this world..." in the last paragraph. Wonderful closing to this poem. You have a lot of talent, and if you stick with writing and send off to publishers, you could very well go places. :)

[13ReasonsWhy]

:'@ so so sad. I could feel every emotion! Every feeling was amazingly conveyed. Another superb great relating write from you! :) amazing...and as always, my favourites. :)