Lifeless

Lifeless

A Poem by Angelove

Your so lifeless, sad and in a mess.
  My creators agree with me, I'm sorry if I smothered you...
 Some times I wish i stayed inside...my mother...never to come out...

  I'm wasted losing time, but your so lifeless, gone never to be seen, I'm sorry if i smothered you. I wont all that is not mine, i want him but were not right, in the darkness i will meet my creators and they will all agree that i'm a suffacator...I should go know quitly for my bones have found a place to lay down and sleep.
   Your so lifeless, I'm sorry if i smothered you...                                                   

© 2012 Angelove


Author's Note

Angelove
please ignore spelling grammer

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its really good

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece. There was only a couple spelling errors. I think you should go back and fix them, it would just make it easier to read. But great content, and message!

Posted 7 Years Ago


So pretty.. Keep it up.. Do u read mine 2 "ANGUISH" If possible then gives ur review..tc

Posted 7 Years Ago


This reads like a letter of forgiveness.... too late for him.... too late for her...

Sometimes in life... love is never enough...

Great read..

Posted 7 Years Ago


your so lifeless, im sorry i smothered you , what a good line , i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love the purple writing and the message your conveying within this creative and emphatic poem. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


That's deep and very sad

Posted 7 Years Ago


it made me grin...............
a unique piece..........

Posted 7 Years Ago


sound like an angry write but mellow in its own apologetic style...
though cleverly disguised it is a firm affirmation of a confession!
Good stuff!

Posted 7 Years Ago


awesome..........wow..nice job......
carry on........may be u should have to write on it something on it...............

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Angelove
Angelove

Manchester, MI



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I have a passion for writing and I can't live without it. It helps me escape to different places when I'm upset. I also love to sing. So hope you like my writing! http://pl.st/p/23452736779 more..

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