Inside

This is a poem I wrote when I was in a very bad place in my life... I hope you like it

I put up walls... inside

Here I am all alone...inside

Never to get hurt again...inside

I know you don't love me...inside

What to do now but just wait...inside

Will i die...inside

No one will care as long as I am...inside

Author's Note

I just want you all to know that I am not a wierdo that is inside all day. Just a side note

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

I loved it very much,
especially the last line ends well,
great write! ----mishel

[Girlintheworld]

I am a fan of the repeat word "inside" at the end of each line. Excellent! Keep up the great writing and thank you for sharing this :)

[Rebecca Rogers]

I really like this :)

Nice work!

[Last Lying Look]

This was neat and kind of heartbreaking.
Great write! It really got my emotions going.

-Elissa :D