My Special One

This poem is dedicated to my beloved cool male pug, Luv. He will be 10 y.o. on May 1st this year.

He sometimes remains me of my father.
I mean a father figure, since I have short memory of my father.
Well, he is more like my grandfather.
A figure of someone who I saw as a father.

Like, he looks around for finding me seriously.
Intentionally.
Curiously. 
Until he finds my look or again looking around, continuously

I would be worried for knowing how serious, 
Curious, 
with ingenious
Or his effort will be continues.

So, I will run to him
Stopping him
Cuddling him
And asking his apology by kissing him 

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

A very good poem, ma'am. All the lines are well-written and the rhythm is excellent.

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Thank you!

[Nisreen]

sweet ................. i like the closing line

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Thank you!

[Carolynn]

It's so nice to have someone so special in your life that is like a father figure - this is a nice tribute to him :)

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Yes, he is a someone to me, always. He's name is Luv, he will be 10 y.o. on May 1st this year...actually he is a cute male pug, a puppy. I am so sorry, I forgot to give description to the poem's subject. Thank you so much for your review, Carolynn. God bless you!

[Carolynn]

Oh that is so sweet :)I have a little Pekingese man who is turning 11 this year! They're so sweet :) I love pugs :)

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Oh my...how wonderful, knowing you having Pekingese! Yes, they are so sweet! I always think that, Pug and Pekingese are family! One loves hairy style and one loves army style Lol!

[barleygirl]

I love that your beautifully-written tribute is filled with tactile knowing, as well as cerebral knowing. I can almost feel this person you're describing, and also I'm feeling the love (((HUGS)))

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Thank you for your lovely review!
It just opened my eyes, that I didn't give enough description of the subject of the poem.
I'll add the info after this, but I tell to you now, that the subject of this poem was and is: Luv, my beloved male pug (a puppy), he will be 10 years old on May 1 this year, yes Luv is always a person to me ;)
I am happy that you're feeling the love too.
This conversation is so beautiful to me.
Thank you!
(((HUGS))) you back!

[barleygirl]

Now I love this poem ten times more! I'm a slobbering animal lover with 5 pets (1 cat, 2 dogs, & 2 bunnies!) There's something special about pugs, altho I've never had one, many of my friends do. They are so loveable!

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Ooohh my...Luv must be so happy if he knows that you love the poem 10 time more now! We are some lucky human being, for having that such adorable being around us. I am sure, all yours have influenced you in some beautiful way of feeling and thinking. Yes, they are so loveable! Thank you for being here and telling me a little story of yours. Now, Luv is under my chair, he leans on my left foot...guess he wants some cuddles :) Have a beautiful day yaa...