something so right

this was actually written for a play that my friend was in. they needed a song for romantic scene, and he told them i could write one. this is only the chorus, which is all i have so far. <3

the way you smile in your sleep

the way you look before you leap

the way your fire sears my heart

how we can't stand to be apart

your love that breaks and 

your love that mends

i hope to god this never ends

so hold my hand

and we'll take flight

i've never known 

something.....so right

Author's Note

(they're lyrics)

Reviews

[Kestrova]

I love this! The rhythm and rhyme scheme work wonders and it really sounds like a great chorus to a great song. I sincerely hope you put up the rest later! ^.^