The Chaos of his Mind

The Chaos of his Mind

A Poem by Daniel_Puyda_2704
"

A poem to summarize the plot of my screenplay.

"

He drops to his knees

Lost in the chaos of his mind

Unable to ever forget

The tragedy he can't rewind

 

He was just another soul

Trying to simply get through the day

Go to class and do the work

And get tomorrow out of the way

 

But expectations and plans are fragile

And almost always meet with despair

And when evil pushes him too far

Hate and rage replace the air

 

He was in the tranquility of his home

As he pulled out a loaded gun

He counted the bullets in the magazine

Ensuring evil will never again see the sun

 

He goes back to that place

And evil is banished to the silence of memory

Or maybe it just takes another form

As wrath coarses through each and every artery

 

But evil never stays free

And he is forevermore locked in a cage

He is now a self-aware animal

Doomed to die here of old age

 

He drops to his knees

Lost in the chaos of his mind

Unable to ever forget

The tragedy he can't rewind

© 2009 Daniel_Puyda_2704


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This was amazing. I really like it. It sounds like you are working hard on something. I cant wait to read the screenplay. Great write. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

112 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on February 6, 2009

Author

Daniel_Puyda_2704
Daniel_Puyda_2704

Calabasas, CA



About
Uhh....... I..... write. ^_^ Nah, really though. Since I don't want to put my life story down (feel free to ask, I'm a nice guy... so I'm told) I'll just say bits and pieces. Writing screenplays is m.. more..

Writing