Voice

Voice

A Poem by Melanie

I think of the way your voice sounded

On Tuesdays in the rain

And how when I told you I liked old books

You said “Same”

 

I think of the way your voice sounded

When you called me after class

And how it sounded in my ear

When I saw you at last

 

I think of the way your voice sounded

When we were driving in your car

And how it was when we got lost

From roaming a little too far

 

I think of the way your voice sounded

When you said you loved me

And how it tasted on my lips

As the reason I couldn’t breathe

 

I hate thinking of the way your voice sounded

When you said it was time to leave

And how you said

“Oh, honey. It’s not you. It’s me.”

 

I hate thinking of your voice

But babe

Sometimes

I have no choice

© 2014 Melanie


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Now it's really #painful!
I hate watching such kinda situations when lovers passed through pains and when the rain too couldn't seem helpful to 'em to save them from their pain. "Tears come on their face, happiness leave the hand of them get lost into the phrase-Haze."

Rating : 5 stars!
Note : "The love is Immoral!"

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very nice glimpse of your love.
The loss is always hard.

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Melanie

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Fantastic final Stanza, very hard hitting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Melanie

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Ironically, it was the easiest one to write. Funny how that works out.
Hey, this is a great piece of work! It's unique. Some might say it's cliche, but I think not. I really like it. Keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Melanie

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on January 5, 2014
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Tags: voice, breakup, love, friend, boyfriend, girlfriend, loss, hurt, pain, depression, depressed, hate, anger, talk

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Melanie
Melanie

Kansas City



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20. A College Student. A Singer/Songwriter. I have a thing for writing songs and poems. I read more books than the average sane person. I would say that my dream is to make a career out of singing .. more..

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