Tick tock, hum along.

Tick tock, hum along.

A Poem by Lissa

Seconds tick by,

moments of our life,

gliding at

the speed of light.

I look at the past,

the future,

a lost chance.

The minute I'm living

never hitting,

not until it's already gone.

Regret,

stress,

time,

constant.

So in this moment

... just breathe.

 

© 2011 Lissa


Author's Note

Lissa
not really sure how I feel about this, but whatever. :)

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Very powerful message. I'd like to see this expanded and the ideas of loss and regret explored a little more. However, in a nutshell I think it expresses something that we've all felt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These things are truths that we barely stop to realize. Everyone is so in a f*****g rush no one takes three seconds to realize that all that worry comes with the price of losing time and added anxiety.

Nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lissa
Lissa

Sartell, MN



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I love writing. It is my hobby as well as my first dscovered love. I have been told I have talent, and I have been told I don't...I take it all with a grain of salt. I have also been told I am wise be.. more..

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