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Secrets

Secrets

A Poem by Meliss@k

  • You're back again.
  • We say we're just friends.
  • Deep inside my soul I long for you to hold
  • But its a secret
  • No one else should know
  • You love another, and I'm just a friend of yours.
  • How do we keep on going? How do we live like this?
  • It's simple, living in a secret.
  • I watch from miles away, but your smile teases my lips.
  • We tell each other jokes, which makes us laugh even more.
  • But you look into our future and see a forbidden war,
  • So we're kept a secret
  • No one else should know.
  • You love another, and I'm just a friend of yours.
  • We keep on going.
  • We play out our lives.
  • We make it look so simple, living in this lie.
  • We fight the feelings we have burning inside.
  • I want to whisper out loud, "Why can't we give us a try?"
  • I want to hold your hand, and live by your side.
  • You'd always be here, we'd never have to hide.
  • But it's a secret.
  • Secrets can't be shared.
  • And still, we're left here, in the frozen air.
  • You love another, and I'm just a friend of yours.
  • How do we keep on going? How do we live like this?
  • It's simple, living in a secret.

© 2012 Meliss@k


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Ouch! Mind you, I love the bullet format. In fact, I'm going to steal it!!

Perhaps this is your attempt to rationalise what is most likely an agonising predicament. (like a list of pros and cons?)

Far be it for me to be dishing out relationship advice, but one thing I think is that if two people REALLY want to be together, then usually wild mustangs can't stop them. The other thing is that any collateral damage involved in two people getting together is never that bad and usually heals pretty quickly. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this detailed review! Much appreciated! I totally agree with what you've said.



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Ouch! Mind you, I love the bullet format. In fact, I'm going to steal it!!

Perhaps this is your attempt to rationalise what is most likely an agonising predicament. (like a list of pros and cons?)

Far be it for me to be dishing out relationship advice, but one thing I think is that if two people REALLY want to be together, then usually wild mustangs can't stop them. The other thing is that any collateral damage involved in two people getting together is never that bad and usually heals pretty quickly. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this detailed review! Much appreciated! I totally agree with what you've said.
Living a secret is simply living lies.
(People should be strong when it comes to relationship.All good things takes time to come.Look at the flowers,it takes time for them to bloom.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

so very true, thank you Emrick for you input

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