Tonight

He walked in by himself and said he would wait for his buddy. Right when he sat down in the restaurant's waiting area we "hit it off." The other hostesses even thought we had met times before.

Have you ever met that person, and just known?

Conversation seemed to naturally flow?
It happened, 

Tonight.

He was mature and kind,
Smiling through his facial hair
As we introduced our lives,

So naked and bare. 

How it happened, I don't know
But I'd give anything to meet him again.
Tell me gentleman,
Where and when?
Any time, any place.
Unless you didn't feel the same, but
I don't think that's the case.

In this deck of cards, we both hold an Ace.

Reviews

[kimmy]

This was incrediable, I think that when you have that special connection with someone no matter how long you have known that person or see that person again, it is magical. I do hope he hurries back, as the love flowing from this poem speaks volumes:)
You have a great way to express love and the way you have put this poem together told of someone who had a great night with that special someone:)

[Meliss@k]

Thank you so much for your wonderful review Kimmy. I always enjoy getting feedback from women with my poetry because I've noticed that mostly men review my stuff. Your review was very kind and I appreciated everything. :)

[kimmy]

You are so welcome, I am going to check out some more of your work..lol, you should add maybe this or one like this in the wild Christmas contest:)

[Meliss@k]

Yay! Gosh that makes me so happy inside :) after you read some more of my work, you should tell me which poem you liked the best and ill add that one I to the wild Christmas contest ;)

[kimmy]

Yea no problem:) I love to read and when it is something that will keep my in tune with it, I will keep reading.

[kimmy]

Okay I would use this one for the contest, as it is for Christmas:) The poem is about one night, and it didn't say which one, so it could be for Christmas lol

[Meliss@k]

Okay! Thanks! :)

[Meliss@k]

It says that none of my poems fit the criteria to be submitted on your contest :(

[kimmy]

oh dang it, lol..I am not sure why. I think that one would have fit perfect:)

[Meliss@k]

It's okey :) I submitted some of my poems to other contest instead :)

[kimmy]

What do you have this poem rated as? is it erotic?

[kimmy]

I did a mean character:) I have another contest but it doesn't end until after Christmas:)

[Meliss@k]

I don't think it has a rating... Is there a way to change the rating?

[Eagle Cruagh]

FACIAL HAIR ? ?
Probably was Abe Lincoln.
Naaaawwww ! I`m just jealous.
He sounds like a real nice guy and
the poem rocks. This poem is a creation,
it sings of desire and admiration and
values, it sings.
Thank you
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Meliss@k]

I'm honored for you to say such encouraging things about this poem. :) I haven't seem "him" since that night but secretly wish that he'll come back to the restaurant I work at again.
One day... :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

If he`s smart he will hurry back.

[Eagle Cruagh]

It has been one year. Did he come back.
Write me at [email protected]

[Meliss@k]

I met him when i was working at a restaurant and never saw him again, luckily though i have a wonderful boyfriend now though, who is my best friend. Everything happens for a reason. :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is something so wondrous in your words... that brilliant moment... the instant connection... it's a beautiful serendipity... Your expressions are just filled with the emotional depth of what that night must have been like. Powerful!

[Meliss@k]

Thank you so much for your review. It was indeed a wonderful night.

[C.R.Turner]

Yes I have. No not him. I mean me, no I mean I met someone like that, no not like you, or him.. oh forget it.. I know what you mean! Nice job. :)

[Meliss@k]

Your review made me giggle. I liked how it was humorous and also rhymed, yet here I am reviewing your comment and considering that our lives are just a rhyme.
:)

[NathanBlackie]

oh my goodness... I know this feeling exactly... maybe not the facial hair, but yeah. it's really good portrayal of... what it is... speaks for itself.

[Meliss@k]

thank you so much for your input! I appreciate anything that I can get and it makes me even happier to know that someone can relate to this!