Dizzy

Exactly what the title says. I get dizzy thinking about him.

I don't think I can do this

The beating of my heart is relentless

Now the moon floats through the sky

But I don't need sleep… do I?

Well I don't think I care

Cause he's not even aware

That he sits in my thoughts buy means

And now he's found his way into my dreams

But he's not even mine

I'm not even fine

He would never see

Just what he does to me

Now I can't sleep again

For he knows me as a friend

But he barely knows me at all

Would he care to watch me fall?

Well, sleep is pointless now

Cannot dream, I forgot how

Wonder if his dreams and I associate

Does he see me when he hallucinates?

And if I don't wake up soon

My mind is like the moon

It's restless in the night

For in the night it's the only light

It's telling me to tell him to

Be true

But he's got me dizzy

He's got me dizzy...

I don't think I think

That he thinks about me like this

And I don't think I think

At all if I think about anything else

I don't think I think

That he thinks about me at all

And I don't think I think

Much

So this is special

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. There's a nice lyrical quality to this and there's obviously a lot of emotion behind the piece. I think there are parts that are a little weak and could be trimmed, but overall, this is fairly well done.