LIFE

This piece is about the struggles in life and how people react to those obstacles.

Life is like embarking on an unknown
journey
The beginning sometimes is difficult
Some people tend to give up,
Others try to rise up

Life is like climbing a slippery wall
Some fall
Some get bored
But the strongest rises above all

Life is like climbing a ladder
The way up is not easy
That’s why some people get busy
In order to live easy

Life is like building a bridge
Making it is not easy
But when the work is finally done,
Everybody tends to appreciate it.

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

Yes young lady life is a struggle

Thing is you have a goal
BUT
When you reach the first step anther raises its head
Fight on or just accept what you already have
O fight on > forever aiming higher

[BlackPrince]

I like how, using similes (which is a very effective poetic device), with picturesque, simple and effective imagery you categorically depict various aspects of life.
Thus there is truth, love and hope in your poem.

Well done!!!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very nice write - every stanza showing how faith and self-determination can overcome life's hurdles and our desires are met. Wonderful share my friend ... :-)