CONFUSED

CONFUSED

A Poem by Mercsa
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This piece talks about the difficulties in trying to make decisions in life

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Alone I lie in a sad state,
Thinking of the future and my current fate
Voices in my head but none I can hear
My head is spinning like a merry go round
Trying to make it stay at one place
I look around, but no where to settle

© 2019 Mercsa


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Here you capture well the state of confusion and indecision.
And I also noticed, whether you meant it or not, to reflect the concept, theme and mood of the poem, your rhyme scheme also seems indecisive.
Because the the first two lines (couplet) rhyme whilst the rest don't, which helps with the title and mood to reflect a confused state of mind.

The overall poem is wonderful.

Wonderful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sometimes we stand alone at a crossroad in our life - that is the time to listen to our inner self and to gather that strength of choice that is from within - great share of words - really enjoyable to read! :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Here you capture well the state of confusion and indecision.
And I also noticed, whether you meant it or not, to reflect the concept, theme and mood of the poem, your rhyme scheme also seems indecisive.
Because the the first two lines (couplet) rhyme whilst the rest don't, which helps with the title and mood to reflect a confused state of mind.

The overall poem is wonderful.

Wonderful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mercsa
Mercsa

Accra, Ashanti, Ghana



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A third year student in the university. I love to read and write a lot. I also love to inspire and empower others. more..

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