Forsaken Memories

Yet another song/poem. About my ever-cluttered mind.

 

Forsaken Memories

 

As I walk up the hallowed halls

Of my fate

Didn’t think I’d feel this bad

 

Across the lines and endless walls

Burning hate

Tough luck, lost all that I had

 

Don’t wanna think about her

This much

But wishing she’d come back

 

Just staring out across the water

As such

Now it’s everything that I lack

 

Forsaken memories

Lost inside my head

Burning up the pages of my life

As these memories fade

Mourning all that I never had

Stabbing through my heart like a knife

 

As I held her in my arms

Didn’t think

That she’d ever leave me

 

She had seemed so calm

Wouldn’t think

That she’d never forgive me

 

Just wish that she would

Come back

And relive all the good times

 

Just hoping I could

Undo that

And erase all the bad times

 

Forsaken memories

Lost inside my head

Burning up the pages of my life

As these memories fade

Mourning all that I never had

Stabbing through my heart like a knife

 

Just me and my memories, inside my head

Feeling so empty inside, feels like I’m dead

It’s so unfair and I just don’t know why

 

I look alright but I’m bleeding inside

Not sure if I wanna continue the fight

But it’s still worth another try

 

Forsaken memories

Lost inside my head

Burning up the pages of my life

As these memories fade

Mourning all that I never had

Stabbing through my heart like a knife

 

Just bleeding inside

Just bleeding inside

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

You know the great part about this was that I was going to tell you to add music to this and make it a song, cuz I hadn't read what you had written on top.
This is really good work here, you know, I could actually here it being sung in my head.
The rhyming scheme was somewhat unique, but boy did it work perfectly here.
I am quite impressed my friend :)
Keep it up!
Don't forget to actually TURN THIS INTO A SONG. :) I mean, with drums and all :P