Hope In The Smallest Things

Hope In The Smallest Things

A Poem by Undying Glory
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My rap about how hope is always there...no matter what the situation

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Hope In The Smallest Things

The world is so dull, the skies are so gray
As we go about our boring lives everyday
We all hate our lives, but what can we do?
Where on earth can we find a sky so blue?

Abused by bosses, parents, teachers, the world,
The walls are closing in, thoughts just a swirl
Waiting for dreams that just don't come true
Wishing there was someone else like you

To commiserate, talk, something for the pain
Just a placebo for all the disdain
You walk, the gray streets falling all around
The rain is pouring, splashing on the ground

"At least my umbrella works," you think to yourself,
But over in the distance you see someone else
She's soaked to the skin, caught out all alone
Running really fast just to get back home

But you give her shelter, she smiles at you,
And you feel your heart lighten, and you smile too. 
With the little things that we do everyday
Don't listen to them who think that hope's gone away. 

It's right in front of you, and whatever you do, 
Hope's in all the smallest things, you know that's true.
All the small things that we do everyday
Bring back the colour to our world so gray

© 2010 Undying Glory


Author's Note

Undying Glory
I just wrote this as I went along, with all my random thoughts...

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Jon
Very inspiring, hopeful piece, good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Man..I really enjoyed reading this. You have created a roller coaster ride of emotion. Your images were remarkable, but IMO your technical skills overshadowed your depictions. I like how you took a person and stripped them of everything, then you made them belong. You then put them up on a pedestal and turned them into a savior. In the end, the person is an inspiration. You should be quite proud of your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very beautiful poem and I truly believe that hope keeps the world going. Well composed.

I have written a poem on HOPE too :
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/prateeksha/526974/

I would like to know what you thin of my point of view of HOPE. Thank You !


Posted 10 Years Ago


Your poem is true. Hope keep us going forward. I like this poem. Told a good story. I like the ending a lot. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


i really enjoyed this...


"Waiting for dreams that just don't come true
Wishing there was someone else like you"

and...

and the rest!!!
this really was so nice...loved the idea behind it...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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The average guy you'd meet on the street, only with a hidden streak. Or several, for that matter. 24 year old, 4th year medical student, studying in Dundee, Scotland. Never underestimate the pow.. more..

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