Memories, They Come To Me.

Memories, They Come To Me.

A Poem by shadrach hah
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Another write from my Vampyre Collection.

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6 ….. Memories, They Come To Me.


Memories, they come to me, 

as we lie on our Dragon Bed, 

of ancient times and battles fought, 

a history book within my head. 

Night’s sublime, eternal love shared, 

our past, a history to tell, 

the hunt, within our nightly grace, 

desires fulfilled in passion’s swell.


What joy comes to my mind, 

when I recount all we have done, 

the journey has been very long, 

before the coming of the sun. 

Beloved, lie in beauty bright, 

in Dragon Bed, you ever shine, 

in peace, I look upon you, 

you are my love’s divine. 


I shall dream of all our glory, 

as you lie here by my side, 

all shall come before me, 

not one thought shall I try to hide. 

Joy and sorrow mingle, 

in the journey of eternal life, 

all shall be, within my dream, 

as I lie with my Vampyre wife.

© 2021 shadrach hah


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we have read many stories about Vampires, but what I like about yours that first it's a poetical series, second as I read this one specially what I feel is more about two old souls who shared many lives together not only a cliche story of Vampires, and this touches me more, this one I like the most of those about I read of your Vampyre series because it speaks everything, your rhythm again is so wonderful~ Hugs*

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the wonderful review, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre .. read more



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again great rhythm and rhyme and dreamy, this is saucy and I like that, definitely has a bite to it. dragon bed...I love that, great piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

Hi Patricia, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I wrote.. read more
Vampyre hugh? Wow, This is wonderful. They are of Ancient in form. Nicely done.
They live and breathe kind of like humans do. Least that is my opinion.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

Hi Kerra, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. The Vampyr.. read more
I am not feeling a vampire vibe from this piece, but rather, this feels like ordinary romance between slightly weird but normal humans. I'm not getting any neck bites or much spooky ambiance here. But these things are not necessary. It's just a response to your claim that you have a "vampire collection" (evidently). When I remove the whole vampire expectation (a vibe I find to be mostly missing), this is simply a well-balanced nostalgic-sounding ballad of life spent together (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

Hi Barleygirl, I can understand that reasoning. All I can say is, these are not Vampire, they are th.. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

Thanks for explaining.
shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

No problem. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs always....Mike.
we have read many stories about Vampires, but what I like about yours that first it's a poetical series, second as I read this one specially what I feel is more about two old souls who shared many lives together not only a cliche story of Vampires, and this touches me more, this one I like the most of those about I read of your Vampyre series because it speaks everything, your rhythm again is so wonderful~ Hugs*

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the wonderful review, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre .. read more

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Added on November 9, 2021
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shadrach hah
shadrach hah

Cowdenbeath, Fife, United Kingdom



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I am a would-be poet who likes to let the heart sing as it chooses. There is always romance in the air. more..

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