A Dream With An Angel.

A Dream With An Angel.

A Poem by shadrach hah
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2nd write in my Valentine's Collection. 2022. Another Sonnet.

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2 ….. A Dream With An Angel.


You are the angel of my peaceful dreams, 

I long for you to hold me in the night, 

your wondrous temple shining like moonbeams, 

we walk through love’s valley, shining so bright.


Soft, the emerald green, beneath our feet, 

the joy of your laughter as we do walk, 

a river runs slowly, our scene complete, 

as our love flows, together we talk.


My beloved joy, we walk in our peace, 

dreams are alive and passion it does sing, 

when I am with you all my troubles cease, 

your hand in mine, love is the song we bring.


Love sings into a horizon of trees, 

we walk by the moon, touched by a tender breeze.

© 2021 shadrach hah


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"Love sings into a horizon of trees" this lines really gets me, another romantic at its crest dear Mike, so lovely, gentle and loving, and I love that again it's a "Sonnet" :>, your bring sweetness and delightful, happy positive vibes to the site and we NEED this with all the sad and troubling world around us. Thank You for keep being inspired to write and share.

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shadrach hah

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Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. Funny ho.. read more



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An impassioned piece of poetry with an exceptional ending that lands the overall theme. This sonnet displayed a lot of heart. I enjoyed reading this write. Thank you for sharing this poem with us, Shadrach.

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shadrach hah

6 Days Ago

Hi Carlos, thank you for dropping by and the review on this write. I always try to put my heart into.. read more
"Love sings into a horizon of trees" this lines really gets me, another romantic at its crest dear Mike, so lovely, gentle and loving, and I love that again it's a "Sonnet" :>, your bring sweetness and delightful, happy positive vibes to the site and we NEED this with all the sad and troubling world around us. Thank You for keep being inspired to write and share.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

6 Days Ago

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. Funny ho.. read more
I wish I had written "Love sings into a horizon of trees"
I can imagine that song being absorbed by the leaves...and then that rustling of love breezing into
our ear.
Nicely done, Mike...
Will is up there smiling.
j.

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lightsong

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Oh Mr. J You also chose my line :> how nice, now may You and love sing into a horizon of trees~~~ se.. read more
shadrach hah

6 Days Ago

Hi Jacob, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. As Gounwah.. read more

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Added on November 23, 2021
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Tags: angel, dream, heart, love, passion

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shadrach hah
shadrach hah

Cowdenbeath, Fife, United Kingdom



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I am a would-be poet who likes to let the heart sing as it chooses. There is always romance in the air. more..

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