Drops of Heaven

Inspirational poem

Drops of Heaven-

Speckled light reflects upon drops
of last nights residing rain
Sparkling prisms of twinkling stars
Like headlights guiding the way

Shadows begotten of the sun
Darkness comes to light
Taken from a somber spell
A drifting high flying kite

Sunny disposition's got me
Riding on golden rays wade pool
Well above high tide
Wind to sails I'm blown

Through uncharted skies
Gale winds to my back
Uncertain as to where I'm going
Mother Nature has now taken over

Dropped on unfamiliar soil
Milky white sand sifts between my toes
Umbrella placed in beach and glass
Serendipity has just taken hold


By Michelle Gent

Reviews

[redzone]

after the dark rain comes the beach!!! I could feel the ocean's spray in your "serendipity" Michelle, now if I can just clean off this sand between my toes... ;0)

redzone

[Michelle Gent]

Redzone thank you so much for taking the time out to comment. I really appreciate it.

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Your words leave me warm on a cold spring day - serendipitous I would say! Beautiful write Michelle.

[Michelle Gent]

Thank you so much for the nice compliment. I really appreciate it.

[Michelle Gent]

Wow thank you so much Jamestown, Aaron Frietes, Confuser and J.Todd. I so greatly appreciate the encouragement.. Sincerely. :)

[Jamestown]

This is gorgeous! The wording and imagery is fantastic. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome poem Michelle! I really enjoyed reading your work :) thanks for sharing

[Michelle Gent]

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.

[Confuser]

1st stanza - woohoo, loving it Michelle: Class, love it! Through uncharted skies - Gale winds to my back
Uncertain as to where I'm going- Mother Nature has now taken over: After the first stanza it was like a ride of uncertainty and I loved it! Everything was wonderful; Milky white sand sifts between my toes...Serendipity has just taken hold. It's like something in that glass was magical. Can I have some? Bravo! Thank you. Dale

[Michelle Gent]

Confuser thank you so much for the generous critique. It was greatly appreciated.

[J Todd Underhill]

Another fabulous piece drops from the pen of Michelle Gent! I love it!

[Michelle Gent]

J. Todd thank you so much. I appreciate it.