Reticulating Poem of Non-sanity in Motion

Reticulating Poem of Non-sanity in Motion

A Poem by BrokenWingedPhoenix
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I've been in a state of depression lately and this is just a simple poem to pull me out of the downward spiral that is sadness.

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Twisted reticulation, poison in your veins.

Nevermore speak of spinning falsehoods and lies.

Asinine, moronic, symbiotic frivolousness.

Mouth agape, ignorance escapes.

Proportional complexity, abyss of shame.

Ignorance is the game.

Manipulation is but a short-lived victory. 

Toxic is the insanity, seeping…maiming.

Never obtaining peace, consuming and draining.

© 2015 BrokenWingedPhoenix


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A amazing use of words. The description was understood of depression because of the powerful use of statements.
"Toxic is the insanity, seeping…maiming.
Never obtaining peace, consuming and draining."
I do understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BrokenWingedPhoenix

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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yes you are right....
So many things you described in such short lines... do tell so much more...
Wonderful

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BrokenWingedPhoenix

8 Years Ago

Thank you, you are very kind.
A amazing use of words. The description was understood of depression because of the powerful use of statements.
"Toxic is the insanity, seeping…maiming.
Never obtaining peace, consuming and draining."
I do understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BrokenWingedPhoenix

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is very good. The brevity, sincerity, and sheer poetry of your ideas really strikes me. The best poems are usually born out of depression or euphoria.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BrokenWingedPhoenix

8 Years Ago

Lately depression has been my home, but writing really seems to help. Thank you for your kind words... read more

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Added on October 7, 2015
Last Updated on October 7, 2015
Tags: depression, anger, ignorance, toxic, sadness, lost

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BrokenWingedPhoenix

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I'm a Browncoat, a Whovian, an animal advocate, a voice for the ones that cannot speak, a friend of the environment, and a warrior woman. As far as hobbies go, I write poetry, short stories and I pain.. more..

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